2019年12月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)真題作文解析（三套匯總）

寫(xiě)作

本次四級(jí)寫(xiě)作考查書(shū)信寫(xiě)作，因此答題時(shí)需要注意書(shū)信的格式。

需要著重強(qiáng)調(diào)的一點(diǎn)是：審題。乍一看下，三篇作文題分別要求推薦一個(gè)“place”, “university” 或“city”，很容易讓部分考生誤以為是要求寫(xiě)一篇參觀游覽，或者介紹型文章，但讀完整個(gè)題干你就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)，這封推薦信的真實(shí)目的是：外國(guó)友人要學(xué)習(xí)中文（或來(lái)華教英語(yǔ)，就學(xué)），在此基礎(chǔ)上為這位外國(guó)友人進(jìn)行推薦。從這里可以得出，推薦信的重點(diǎn)應(yīng)該放在你所推薦的某處，可以從哪些方面幫助到這位外國(guó)友人實(shí)現(xiàn)他的目的，而非僅僅著眼于介紹該處。明確這一點(diǎn)后，本次的寫(xiě)作的題目把握應(yīng)該就到位了。

結(jié)構(gòu)上看：

首先，仍舊是剛剛強(qiáng)調(diào)的書(shū)信格式，注意稱(chēng)謂。

然后每部分的內(nèi)容可以是：

首段：寒暄問(wèn)候，給出你的推薦，

中段：分幾個(gè)方面陳述你的推薦理由：注意要與外國(guó)友人的目的要有關(guān)系

末段：表達(dá)你對(duì)友人即將來(lái)華的期待，以及附上書(shū)信結(jié)束語(yǔ)及問(wèn)候

詞匯上看：

關(guān)鍵詞“建議”可以選用“recommendation”, “suggestion”，“advice”，注意靈活選用詞性。

然后需要留意，如果推薦的是University，既可以是實(shí)際真實(shí)的University，也可以虛設(shè)一個(gè)。但如果是真實(shí)的University，必須要確保學(xué)校名稱(chēng)拼寫(xiě)正確，避免弄巧成拙。如：北京大學(xué)=Peking University而不是 Beijing University。穩(wěn)妥起見(jiàn)，用XXX University這樣不過(guò)不失的方法未嘗不是一個(gè)明智選擇；推薦其它地點(diǎn)，城市時(shí)同樣需要注意拼寫(xiě)正確。

此外，同學(xué)們?cè)趯?xiě)作時(shí)還可以在詞匯多樣性方面加強(qiáng)重視。我們本次直播的范文中，推薦“母?！睍r(shí)，即使只是為了表達(dá)這個(gè)學(xué)校，就分別使用了學(xué)校名字(Shanghai Institute of Languages)、my university，擬人的“she”以及學(xué)校名字的首字母縮略(SIL)這樣四種形式，如此一來(lái)就避免了重復(fù)單調(diào)。前兩者一般同學(xué)也許還能夠想到，但后兩者無(wú)疑就能讓考生在眾多競(jìng)爭(zhēng)者中脫穎而出。

句法及銜接方面：

中段陳列原因時(shí)，仍舊可以使用我們一直以來(lái)強(qiáng)調(diào)的提示詞與連接詞如：first of all, then, therefore等，靈活且正確的使用從句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句或倒裝句等豐富的句式，可以為你的文章增添亮點(diǎn)。

四級(jí)寫(xiě)作解析

01

【題目】

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a foreign friend who wants to study in China. Please recommend a university to him. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

【參考范文】

Dear Jim,

I am writing this letter for the purpose of recommending a university to you since I have heard that you plan to study in China. From my perspective, the most suitable one for you is Peking University, one of China’s top institutions of higher education.

The reasons why I recommend this university can be listed as follows. First and foremost, it has high reputation inacademic research, so you can fully devote yourself to study and make great progress there. Moreover, abundant extracurricular activities and theharmonious atmosphere in campus would allow you to make many friends and enjoy the life. Besides, Peking university is located in Beijing, the capital as well as the cultural center of China. Thus, you can visit many great scenic spotsand explore the city in your spare time. 

If there is any chance, you could come to Beijing and have a campus tour in person, which may help you make the final decision. I am looking forward to your arrival and please feel free to contactme for further information.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

02

【題目】

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a foreign friend who wants to teach English in China. Please recommend a city to him. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

【參考范文】

Dear David,

I’m glad to know that you will come to China to teach English. So I’m writing this letter to recommend a city to you.

Compared with other cities, Beijing, as the capital city of China, owns many advantages. On the one hand, as the cultural and economic center of China, Beijing is home tomany famous universities. Therefore, there are greater demands for learning English in this city. A host of qualified English teachers like you will find it easy to find a job here. On the other hand, Beijing is an international metropolis where you can enjoy a decent salary and a wonderful life by teaching. I deem that if you teach in Beijing, the future of your life and career development will be promising.

I hope my recommendation can provide some references for you and wish you a delightful journey in China. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

03

【題目】

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write aletter to a foreign friend who wants to learn Chinese. Please recommend a placeto him. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

【參考范文】

Dear Tom,

On hearing that you are searching for a place to learn Chinese, I am writing this letter to recommend the college town in my city to you.

There are several reasons why I think the college town is the best choice. First of all, the college town is home to an umber of top Chinese universities, where you can gain access to high-quality Chinese language courses. Taught by professors who speak standard Mandarin, these courses are extremely effective in boosting your listening, reading and writing skills. Besides, with many open-minded and friendly students around, you can easily make friends and practice your spoken Chinese. Another advantageis that there are many language clubs, in which you can meet people from other countries who are just as enthusiastic about learning Chinese as you. I think you can also communicate with them about the difficulties and fun in learning Chinese.

To conclude, I deem that the city college town is an ideal place for foreigners to learn Chinese. And I believe that if you take full advantage of it, your Chinese will  be improved a lot.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming